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Re: Secrets of the World-Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! To my relief and horror it was Brittany Um, I don't think you can be relieved and horrified at the ...
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Re: Prologue
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I was reading the first chapter of this novel, but then I realized there was a prologue! So here I am ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 1 - A Card Game To Remember
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! So I already reviewed the last chapter before it was reposted and I didn't want to bore you with a ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 2 - An Invitation to Mount Crusto
Hi there! So you finally got the right chapters posted in the right order. Good. I shall pick up my reviews from where I left off then :) I don't ...
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Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 2: The Spell
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I read chapter 1 first, but since you had a lot of good reviews on it, I figured that I'd just ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Endless dreams(Chapter 2)
Hi there! Noelle back again for a Review Day review! Ah, so now all of the events in chapter 1 make sense. I'm glad that you explained that early on ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Endless dreams (Chapter One)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I saw chapter 2 in the Green Room so I figured I'd stop by the first chapter so the next one ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Seven: Asteria's First Day
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Yesh! It's heeerrreeee! I've been waiting for the next chapter :) The bell rings and the Single Meanest Woman Alive The ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The cold within: Chapter 1.
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! The first thing I'd like to say is that I love the little quirk your character has. I took a creative ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: I Die Daily Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! One thing I noticed that really bugs me is that your dialogue is all smashed together. There's a rule of thumb ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Amalia: the little garden gnome Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Well, Birkhoff has managed to pick out every single little grammatical and whatever issues you have with this chapter (he has ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Game On Level 0.1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I don't think this chapter is boring at all. It may seem like it though because there isn't a lot of ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Home
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I look out my window at my house. What window are you talking about? I assumed that you are talking about ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Breathing in the Darkness
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Whew, what an intense story! I don't know why, but when I clicked on this story I thought it would be ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Dragon Boy Chapter 1 (EDITED)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! An important nitpick here: I really miss dad. Dad should be capitalized. You're using it as his name, therefore it should ...
May 25, 2014
