Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. I really only have a few things to talk about with this poem. First off, I have to say that your poetry ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. What triggered his death, then? Did someone murder him? Serena couldn’t tell - she was just a student, unlucky to be the ...

Hi there! Thanks for giving me something to review! Seriously. I mean, how else am I going to spend my time stuck in my house because of 4+ feet of ...

Hi there! The main thing I want to focus on in this chapter is how inside her head Jen is. Sure it's all important for us to know because we're ...

Hi there! I saw that you posted this chapter while I was stalking your wall and I figured I'd come check it out. I went back and read through the ...

Hi there! According to Sunglow’s direction, it seemed like we were going to a secluded building in this area. This sentence leads to quite a lot of questions. Okay, maybe ...

Hi there! I'm glad we got explanations of what the prayer/religious terms are. Now I have a better idea about what's going on during prayer time. It flows well too. ...

Hi there! One thing I've learned about chapter beginning is that you always want to start with as little pronouns as possible. It's more of an organizational thing I guess. ...

Hi there! It's me again :3 I'm going to leave a rather short review here for this one since Sureal mentioned a lot of what I would say. Hopefully I ...

Hi there! I was intrigued by your first chapter so I figured I'd pop over to read the prologue before reviewing. So, here I am! This is awful short. Just ...

Hi there! I'm sorry for his review being so late. I was sure I reviewed this one already >< This might just be personal preference, but the blinks in the ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. Finally. Fair warning, I think this review is going to end up being out of order and/or confusing because I came back ...

Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room. I've went back and read through the previous chapters so I'm all caught up. “A ...

Hi there! I'm here to save your chapter from the clutches of the Green Room :3 I've read through the previous chapters so I'm all caught up. And let me ...

Hi there! The premise of your story is what really pulled me in. I was left guessing until near the end who the narrator was and why he (I'm assuming ...