Noelle

Hi there! I really like these lyrics. From the beginning I was able to sing it in my head, putting my own music to it. I like the message and ...

Hi there! Thanks for being my first requested review! Spread the word! This was a good story. I enjoyed reading it and it made me smile. You did a great ...

Hi there! This was a really good piece. I agree with your decision to put this story in play form. It is quite heavy on dialouge and there probably wouldn't ...

Hi there! This was a really, really great piece! The description was just, amazing. I enjoyed reading it. It painted a decorated picture in my head. I could see the ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this story. It was very interesting and caught my attention at the first sentence. You kept my attention through the whole story. Great job! You ...

Hi there! First I wanted to comment on the cover art you did. It's great! After reading this prolouge and the little synopsis you gave us, it seems perfect. The ...

Hi there! This is a really great story. I read the prolouge and chapter one too and you did a good job taking the story from one point to the ...

Hi there! So, I am an insanely avid Harry Potter fan. I quite enjoy reading Harry Potter fanfics. I joined fanfiction so I could read them :) Anyway, I really ...

Hi there! I honestly really enjoyed this story! It was well written, kept me reading, and was funny. I don't know if you meant it to be funny, but it ...

Hi there! Congrats on your first post on YWS! :) I just want to start out by saying this story has great potential. It's has a great plot and a ...

Hi there! This was a very interesting piece to say the least. It was good though because it made me think. Well, it confused me as I read along, but ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm going to comment on the plot here real quick if you don't mind. I think the plot is great and good natured. ...

Hi there! I liked this piece. I think it was quite funny and perfectly written. This reminded me of an authors attempt to get more information about their character. I ...

Hi there! I enjoyed reading this story about your life. But I agree with paintingtherain, I think it was a little too simple and factual. I feel like you just ...

Hi there! Wow, this is great! This is the kind of essay I talked about when I commented on your other essay. I like the way you compared a corridor ...