Noelle

Hi there! Spaces command me into nothing is to be ashamed of as far as Everything’s solid? These four lines are confusing to me. Honestly, I'm not really sure what ...

Hi there! These are some really great lyrics! It's refreshing to read the lyrics people post here on YWS because they're real. The types of songs that are popular now ...

Hi there! This was a very intereseting story. It was written well and May was definitely a believable character. I didn't find any grammer or spelling errors so you're good ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! This is really great! You definitely put a lot of imagery into this. I could see everything you were describing, good job! I like the ...

Hi there! (again) I really like the beginning of this, you've got a good thing going. I like the way you wrote it, it seems like a poem. Your rhyming ...

Hi there! This is a very interesting story. I think your use of bad language really gets the point across of how intense it is between your main character and ...

Hi there! Wake me up from this I can't sleep in empty bliss Laugh and cry through my emptiness Laugh manically at my own craziness So, I really like this ...

Hi there! So since this isn't finished, I'll just comment on your refrain because that's the part you wanted to know about. I think your refrain is great. It really ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It has a great flow and there's no part where it falters from the flow. You put good emotion into this. I ...

Hi there! I took four years of French in high school and I feel really stupid for not nowing what the word bonheur means! Does it mean hapiness? I feel ...

Hi there! Allright, I don't have much to say about this because I can tell that it came straight from your heart. Who am I to critique your feelings? Anyway, ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! But I and Vikram and I had decided that no matter what, we wanted his autograph and we were determined to get it. Just a ...

Hi there! Rain: This has great imagery. I can definitely see the rain falling from the sky, pounding down on the flowers making them droop. Although, something about the word ...

Hi there! The first sentence is correct. You can't really tell 'you' something, can you? You need tp say yourself. I hate spelling/grammer checkers because they get it wrong half ...

Hi there! Just a couple of nitpicks: He did n 't see how a fragile, five-foot eight man with the most 'nerdy' lifestyle could even seem remotely intimidating, but he ...