Young Writers Society

This poem was really interesting it was one of those poem where you interpret what it means to you, or that's at least how I read it. I thought it flowed well even though it kind of went off in different directions I was able to enjoy it. I like the comment about a cat with nine lives when why does it meow when it's hungry. I thought that was very creative thinking!

Well, if a cat has 9
lives to spend then
why does it meow when
it’s starving?

Hi there!

Spaces command me
into nothing is to be ashamed
of as far as
Everything’s solid?

Oh my God, I love this! Your language was absolutely perfect, with great imagery. I liked the part about spinning concrete webs of lies. It was pretty epic. And the line where you ask about why cats care if they starve when they have nine lives was pretty good, too. I didn't really find anything wrong with it, other than maybe that you should try to make the lines more balaned with syllables. Keep up the good work.