User avatar

Nobunaga

Nobunaga

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hunted

    Hello! While reading this, I couldn't get "Gone" out of my head. It's a book that's about these group of teenagers trying to survive after all the adults one day ...

    Mar 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: A Soul's Frolic: Part 1

    Hello! Okay, I loved this. I love Gris. I love Naomi. I don't know what it is about this, but I'm already really attached to your characters - Gris in ...

    Mar 23, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter Four]

    Hello! I read your other three chapters before reviewing this one, just letting you know because I don't want you to think I just skipped to Chapter 4. Moving on ...

    Mar 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Ordeal: Flash Fiction Twiterature Genre

    Hello! I burst out laughing at the end of this. I was so convinced this was something serious! I was expecting like, I don't know, some huge crash or natural ...

    Mar 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Glasses 0A

    Hello! First of all, I really like the setting of this novel. It seems to be set in the future and your description of the streets are cool. I also ...

    Mar 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: "Danser" Pt. 1

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm already in love with this story. I haven't read many things written in this sort of perspective, so as soon as I saw "you", I ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Chapter I: Leo

    Hello! Very interesting intro. I loved the imagery in that opening set of lines and that last part The fucker finally died. really piqued my interest. It sets a tone ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Mist Over There ~ Chapter 0: Runaway Spirit

    Hello! Immediately, this is very calming to read. I feel like I'm being read a bedtime story or something. I love the added pictures, too! It adds even more to ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Cocaine And Other Things (Chapter 2)

    Hello again! I'm sorry to say, but I don't really like this part as much as the first. Mainly, I don't see where Cocaine's point of view can progress beyond ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Dear Cocaine and Other Things

    Hello! Okay, I have to admit, I love stories about drugs, homelessness, mental illness, and pretty much any of the other messed-up, dirty parts of life. So, I'm hooked, already. ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Garden of Eden - Chapter 2: A Snake in the Garden

    Hello again! First off, I love that we're starting where we left off! Part of me was afraid that chapter one was more of a prologue but thank god! But ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Gardens of Eden (V.3) - Ch.1 - The Garden of Eden

    Hello! Well this was super short, so I don't have all that much to say. First of all, I really liked that line about withering skin peeling away. It really ...

    Mar 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Souls and Skins (Part 1-ish)

    Hello! I swear I reviewed this yesterday but I guess I didn't? Okay, the premise for this story is amazing ! I love the idea of souls being transferred to ...

    Mar 20, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter One

    Hello! I've just finished reading the first part of this and I've decided to pause and write down my thoughts before I forget them all lol The first thing that ...

    Mar 20, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Elemental [2]

    Hi! Me again! It was nice to see some action in this part. With your writing style, it was easy to follow the fight scene. In my experience, writing action ...

    Mar 19, 2018


Who overcomes by force, hath overcome but half his foe.
— John Milton (Poet)