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Re: The Hunted
Hello! While reading this, I couldn't get "Gone" out of my head. It's a book that's about these group of teenagers trying to survive after all the adults one day ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: A Soul's Frolic: Part 1
Hello! Okay, I loved this. I love Gris. I love Naomi. I don't know what it is about this, but I'm already really attached to your characters - Gris in ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter Four]
Hello! I read your other three chapters before reviewing this one, just letting you know because I don't want you to think I just skipped to Chapter 4. Moving on ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: The Ordeal: Flash Fiction Twiterature Genre
Hello! I burst out laughing at the end of this. I was so convinced this was something serious! I was expecting like, I don't know, some huge crash or natural ...
Mar 22, 2018 -
Re: Glasses 0A
Hello! First of all, I really like the setting of this novel. It seems to be set in the future and your description of the streets are cool. I also ...
Mar 22, 2018 -
Re: "Danser" Pt. 1
Hello! Welcome to YWS! I'm already in love with this story. I haven't read many things written in this sort of perspective, so as soon as I saw "you", I ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Chapter I: Leo
Hello! Very interesting intro. I loved the imagery in that opening set of lines and that last part The fucker finally died. really piqued my interest. It sets a tone ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Mist Over There ~ Chapter 0: Runaway Spirit
Hello! Immediately, this is very calming to read. I feel like I'm being read a bedtime story or something. I love the added pictures, too! It adds even more to ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Cocaine And Other Things (Chapter 2)
Hello again! I'm sorry to say, but I don't really like this part as much as the first. Mainly, I don't see where Cocaine's point of view can progress beyond ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Dear Cocaine and Other Things
Hello! Okay, I have to admit, I love stories about drugs, homelessness, mental illness, and pretty much any of the other messed-up, dirty parts of life. So, I'm hooked, already. ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Garden of Eden - Chapter 2: A Snake in the Garden
Hello again! First off, I love that we're starting where we left off! Part of me was afraid that chapter one was more of a prologue but thank god! But ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Gardens of Eden (V.3) - Ch.1 - The Garden of Eden
Hello! Well this was super short, so I don't have all that much to say. First of all, I really liked that line about withering skin peeling away. It really ...
Mar 21, 2018 -
Re: Souls and Skins (Part 1-ish)
Hello! I swear I reviewed this yesterday but I guess I didn't? Okay, the premise for this story is amazing ! I love the idea of souls being transferred to ...
Mar 20, 2018 -
Re: Glowpeak Academy- Chapter One
Hello! I've just finished reading the first part of this and I've decided to pause and write down my thoughts before I forget them all lol The first thing that ...
Mar 20, 2018 -
Re: Elemental [2]
Hi! Me again! It was nice to see some action in this part. With your writing style, it was easy to follow the fight scene. In my experience, writing action ...
Mar 19, 2018
