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Re: a burst of affection from sixth grade
hi there! Just wanted to say an amazing piece of art. it's always difficult to portray the way you feel on a piece of paper,but you were amazing. when you ...
May 13, 2017 -
Re: A question, a thought, an answer
Hi there! The way you have brought the stages boy-parents-therapist-yourself is soo good. As a poem i completely appreciate your effort but if this happening to you i'm disappointed. If ...
May 13, 2017 -
Re: How do I?
Beautiful and well framed. for a second i thought how deeply you were affected by love. The poem seemed as if it came straight out of your so called "bruised ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: on goes life
The thoughts were conveyed beautifully. All the stanzas were beautifully built, but in the last stanza when you say "i told the blank walls so and they told me to ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: there was a time when my friends included everyone who smiled back
Always rolls back the years when we read such kind of amazing things.Too good I would say. The repetition was perfectly framed. Perfectly defined the first 20 years. Many people ...
Apr 2, 2017 -
Re: Begin again
hello, The repetition is good.Good to see the meaning or the depth it has.Always inspiring. it would have been better if u have used "just stand your ground and plant ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: Rooftop
The way you've described is amazing.I could clearly feel rather visualize what you were trying to convey.Beautifully conveyed. My favourite part was "Under the sky of a million stars I’m ...
Apr 1, 2017 -
Re: Goodbye (depressing)
I would say well written. iBut i am disappointed incase if you are thoughts are the same. The way you are thinking,I feel you are too young to talk about ...
Apr 1, 2017
