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I dashed through the town toward my house. I think it should be towards . I stopped and looked around. I had never been in this yard before. How did ...

I got the feeling this should have been for Hallowe'en? I liked it though. :D :P

Yes, Kyle knew exactly why he’s here at the mercy of another head-shrinker. Kyle knew exactly why he was here.... The woman, in her late forties, early fifties looked through ...

Why is some of the parts written in the past tense and some in the present tense? I liked it but I can't add much more to what Fishr or ...

What a weird computer you have. :? Emily woke up to the sound of gunshots. Startled, she sat up, her eyes wide with -- With what? Wake up, Eat breakfast ...

I'd have to agree with Amice, I did suggest doing research into the Victorian Era so then it'll be easier to write. "Whots the matter, young man?....I'm sure she'll be ...

Oh, I can't stand this any more! Thought Emily desperately, pulling her shawl around her and quickly running up the steep steps to the door. -- Oh, I can't stand ...

If you write about the Victorian Era, you should do a little research into the things you write about. The Victorians had unfair treatment but I don't think Emily would ...

"Allow me, to escort you to dinner. Oh, and my name is John" -- The gentleman should introduce himself first and he should call her 'Miss' because people were meant ...

I didn't read hers until AFTER MY GODDAMN POEM! wtf is everybody accusing me of copying them? GODDAMNIT FINE I'LL DEFINE DAMN MOON BOOTS! Actually anyone could have thought of ...

I feel as if this should be in the 'Other Fiction' section as this did not seem to be set in the future and there isn't anything sci-fi about it. ...

I've only read the first part and there are a few spelling mistakes. Before you submit your work try to check over the spellings using the spellchecker. The salt licked ...

I love stories that are from the points of view from an animal/creature instead of a humans. This was very short but it kept me interested. I felt unwanted. my ...

This series is in my favourites list, I couldn't put the books down and have finally got all three books which I can reread anytime. Ptolemy's gate was a bit ...

I've read all three books. My favourites are Interview with the Vampire and The Vampire Lestat, I really hated Quuen of the Damned. What is wrong with Louis? I liked ...