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Re: The Prophecy.
I have never been very good at reviewing poems so sorry if I am a little weird here, hahha. I do enjoy the fantasy genre which may make me a ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: Take a bow
Hey there! I am sorry if my review is lacking its mainly because review day is over and I feel kinda burned out but I'll try to give a good ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: The Maze Of Life
I really loved your opening line We are all lost I always have this belief that when you have a good opening line then it will be easier to have ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Night
This poem I felt that quite a lot of emotion built up within it. I felt that it was rather said which had me even more invested inside it. One ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: My Friend
I really liked this subject matter. It was very unique and was unlike anything I had seen before. I felt that it was very powerful but lacked a good amount ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Count To Ten
As a first poem it is phenomenal. The structure was very unique and unlike anything I had ever seen before. I could strongly feel the raw and uplifting emotion booming ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Not Yet Solved
I always have a soft spot for works which start off with a question. They always seem to draw me in so well What is it? Also I loved your ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Reflections
I didn't really feel that this was very scary. I seen it as more of a Halloween horror. Almost child like. That isn't to say it was bad. In fact ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Day I Made Everyone Hate Me
Sweet holy mother of god did I giggle up a storm when I read this. when I felt the need, to release a fart. I really had to get a ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)
The irony here is what makes this poem all the more funny. I saw the title and thought this needs to be read. Glad I did. As I read along ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Natural High
I loved how the innocents just smashed through this poem. Very powerful and brought a warm fuzzy feeling inside me. Made me want to go back to my childhood. Not ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Bus In All Of Us
I always have this idea that if you have a good opening then you've tackled on of the hardest task in writing. Your opening We sway with every turn. We ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Princess's Feet
This is a very nice set up for perhaps a novel and I felt that the potential reached far beyond a haiku. Having said that I did enjoy this poem ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Fantasy
Fantasy has always had a soft spot within my heart so I was drawn into this poem like a sucker. I enjoyed reading about how amazing this magical world is. ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Re-peat
I loved the flow and almost violent beauty felt within this poem. However I felt that the poem lacked any real and raw emotion. It was, however, very well written ...
Oct 27, 2013
