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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop the Masquerade Chapter One

    Hey! I'm Ninja (or NCM, whichever), and I'll review this chapter for you. First of all, this sounds promising, keep it up. But there were a few mistakes-accidents, I'm sure- ...

    Apr 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Can you see me? (Prologue)

    I really like it! It's really good, I didn't even notice the grammatical mistakes. It's really intriguing and interesting, like at the beginning of a movie right before they show ...

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Giver by Lowis Lowry, Epilogue

    Is cool, is cool. I liked this, but I really don't think it tied up the gajillion loose ends that book had. But then again, maybe it wasn't supposed to. ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Hermione's Adventure

    I could review this, but I don't feel like it. I did like this, though, a lot; I always did wonder what happened to Ron and Hermione. I think you ...

    Apr 15, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Familiar ~ Section of a story

    Hey! Cool story, now I shall review! I switched on my i-pod. I'm used to it being spelled iPod, but you may know it differently. I sang Blink 182's What's ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Last Storm (1)

    Hello, Cap'n! I'm going to review now. :3 I think about the last time I saw a suit, sixty years ago, and my fathers. You should change the last bit ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter 1 (Victoria)

    Hi! This is my first review, so... yeah! I nod, oh ya you are probably wondering were we are walking to. Should be: I nod. Oh yeah, you are probably ...

    Apr 14, 2010


Every really new idea looks crazy at first.
— Alfred North Whitehead