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Hello Bhayden or Brie! I think that this is an interesting story. First of all, I like the level of detail that you placed into your works, it makes it ...

Hey there! This is such a great poem. I love the imagery that you've placed into the this, all the things that are trying to portray the emotion being felt. ...

Almost nightly, I watch plumes of smoke come out from cities in Libya from news networks, and at the same night, I also come here and talk to some people ...

Wow! This is a great poem guys, I love how you described MacNair here. The tone of this poem is very unsettling - IN A GREAT WAY! Those 3 stanzas ...

Hey Allie! This is a great poem, I love how you focused on the birds yet you talked about the different aspects the affect their lives, it's well though out! ...

I loved the concept of your story, especially the theme of love and friendship in your story, it makes the reader have a light-hearted feeling inside them. I also loved ...

I like how you write this poem, pointing out the problem in humanity's ways like greed and lust. The first few stanzas really shocked me, although I loved how you ...

I like how you set the mood in the Poem. It really captures the suspense the persona is expressing. It's pretty great for something short! Keep up the Good work ...