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Wow, it just keeps getting better and better. I found it cool how you have that his powers are controlled by his emotions. And I that he had forgotten how ...

Hey, great fairy tale.

Hey, awesome story :-D I really loved the intensity of it. And it is not to fast passed or to slow, it is perfect. Then, out of the hellish inferno ...

Hey, Okay, so I really like this. But, wow, it is sad. His wife leaving him and taking the kids. His life sounds so lonely. I have to say this ...

I'm glad you liked it

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Okay… I really liked that. It was sad and heartfelt. There was one sentence I found quite confusing though. It was; I truly loved her, and she loved me too, ...

I liked this prologue. It had a great sense of urgency but I felt like it needed to be more descriptive. And that the Captain should show more of his ...