Nike

First off, I gotta say that this is a wonderful piece. It pulled the reader in and interested them with every sentence you wrote. But, I do agree with the ...

I liked this story alot, it was different then any other. It completly pulled me in. I loved how you explained everything by showing not telling (which I'm trying my ...

HAPPY REVIEW DAY!!!! *clears throat* alright then, that was awkward... oh well. I'm here to review this lovely new piece! color - comments color - spelling/grammer color - edits overall ...

Here to review this piece. I'm trying to sound formal here, I think that was bad... Well, I'm here so, let's get started! Charlie I used to hate tying my ...

Wow! This was really good! I can't beelieve that you actually wrote something like that, I'm not saying that you couldn't, you could obviously... But this is really clever! Write ...

My second review of your stories... hope I won't be as harsh this time. :D I wake up the next morning with my room cleaned. Okay, show us the clean ...

Hey! I'm here to do my set of reviews! I will be a bit harsh since you are a starter writer. color - delete color - help color - edits ...

I liked it. Great plot, the whole idea is great. Hey, I sent you the edited version! I edited for you remember? Well, it's such a nice piece, if you ...

Dear You, As I sit here at my laptop I'm speechless and don't know where to begin. When we first started going out , ourlives were filled with smiles and ...

I like this so far, but where's the fantasy. I guess that I'll have to wait. I enjoyed reading it! No edits needed. Just perfect! Keep Writing! Nike :) PM ...

Hi. Read your story. And to tell you the truth, I didn't like it. Some people will, some people wont. But it's just so confusing! Your spelling is sometimes worng ...

Hiya. Well, nice plot, I don't like it when Nate kills himself though, it's just really sad. But since it's part of the story, make a back flash. We really ...

Hi, I viewed your piece here. To be honest, I didn't like it. I liked it a little bit but it still didn't pull me in. The writing is great, ...

Hi! I found your title interesting so I popped on this page. I read the story, nicely written, great description, but lack of describing the MC. So, you're saying that ...

This is so funny and cute. You should write more stories that are like this. But, I didn't like it how the elves sued Santa! Hey, it's your story, it's ...