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  • Poetry » Satire, Fantasy Re: Spider-Man

    Hi Dark,I enjoyed reading this piece of poem.I think it has quiet deep meanings inside. "You hang me with contumely, now I was covered with a gummy hatred, you disable ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Got You

    Hi there, alilovessandy,here i am to make my review on your poem! Like usually,you always impress me with your poem. It is full of emotion and surprises that makes the ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Other » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Randomisty writing

    Hi RedApril29th,here I am to make my review on your 'Randomisty writing'. First of all,I really love the (Eternal) part,much more like a poem so nice and pretty cute to ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Girl

    Hi there,venividiandvici have a nice day.Here I am to review on your 'sweet' poem :)No worries about the sometimes did't work^^ Aww..who is that girl who review my poem?^^-->Well straight ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hold the Wind

    Hi Liaya,here I am to make my review on your poem! First of all,I like the concept here when you use the wind to represent power,dream and hope from the ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Lords, Give Me Courage...

    Hi Aley,here I am to make my review on your poem.Based on the title of your poem, I think it will lead to a beautiful words here. But I missed ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Other » Lyrical, General Re: Have a heart

    Hi there,arianaSarroyo,here I am to make my review on your poem. I like the theme of the poem which shows the importance of the heart in people's lives.Not been covered ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, Romantic Re: A Little Too Much

    Hi there,thewritersdream.Here I am to make my review on your wonderful short story.I see,this is for Iggy contest,well I am still blur with my own music here--Straight to the point ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This Aunt I had

    Hi there, Trinidian welcome to YWS!So here I am to make my review on your story. First of all,I noticed here that you really have a talent in writing.I simply ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Wu (Without)

    Hi there, EloquentDragon,what a great story to read here. I could feel mixed emotions in it when reading your story here.I love the detail in the story that explain the ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Come Back To Me

    Hi lyricalrebel,what a nice poem to read here.The tone of your poem really gives an emotional effect to is filled with feelings of frustration, sadness and disappointment when someone lose ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Then and Now

    Hi there,so here I am to make my review on your poem! Wow,I think I know what you mean here.Based on your poem, I can feel the feeling or mood ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Five, Part One

    Hi there, ShadowVyper.Have a great here I am to make my review on your incredible story. I really like your writing style that triggers a various emotions to the reader.The ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heart of a Firebird: Chapter 1 - The Girl With No Name

    Hi there Liaya,so here I am to make my review on your fantastic novel! First of all,I really enjoyed reading your story here.I love the way you bring your ideas ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: A Girl and Her Bird

    Hi there, thewriterinside.Have a great day,so here I am to make review on your story titled 'A Girl and Her Bird'.From the title,I thought the main character would be the ...

    Aug 30, 2013


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