NightKaizer

HEELLO TheStormAroundMe, A short story about someone texting their ex. Or maybe not her ex, but they broke up. I like the idea of a one-sided conversation. Makes it seem ...

HEELLO Wunderbar, A short story about a couple of immigrants that are doing more than just being immigrants. I like how you decided to shoot the guy instead of spare ...

HEELLO Falconer, A poem about a night drive. I must say, I really felt the acceleration in that last stanza. And I like how you compared the car to a ...

HEELLO amelie A poem about keeping it together after death. Like Kaos mentioned, I like the roman numerals. And that indentation in the butterfly knot line. The idea of the ...

HEELLO Deep Roses, A poem about secrets I guess. I read the description. It's a very short poem which is good since more people will take the time to read ...

HEELLO Dachsie, A poem about water in the form of life's sadness. The quotes you added at the end of each stanza are very helpful in understanding the poem better! ...

HEELLO Phoenix Kitten, A topic about an artist in suicide. I have to say, that last word really got me. At first, I thought this paragraph was about an artist ...

HEELLO Lightning North, A song about needing your true love. When I first saw the name, the song "Let Me Love You" by Justin Bieber suddenly came to mind. I ...

HEELLO Lau2001, A short story about being alive. I can tell that it's a short short-story. The first few lines looked kind of like a poem and then I saw ...

HEELLO MoonLitTragedy, A poem about life written in flowers. First off, this poem actually rhymes! I'm surprised not many people have written poems that actually rhyme. This is the first ...

HEELLO Artemis, A poem about the son of Hephaestus. It's kind of like how people like to be the son/daughter of Hades or Zeus. I like how you crossed out ...

HEELLO Ineedy0u, A story about the sacrifice of an angel for a mortal girl. The first paragraph was confusing until I saw "eighteen years later". Then things started to make ...

HEELLO MissGangamash, A story about twins hiding from police. What exactly did Luca do? I like how you kept the readers guessing. You can actually kind of piece the clues ...

HEELLO JustPerks, A song about not being able to let go of the memories of someone you loved, no matter how hard you try. Every song has a pattern to ...

HEELLO Remembrance, A poem about being yourself. It's very similar to the poem you wrote earlier- "I'm Tired", it was called. And I bet everyone runs into the same problem. ...