Niebla

Hey pegasus! So I’ve seen you talk about this in chat a lot and I thought I’d check it out since it hasn’t got very many reviews yet. Before I ...

Hi 10FeetUnder! As the beginning of a story, there are a lot of things I really like about this – I’m going to assume this is just the beginning and ...

Hey mystogan! Sorry for the late review – I’ve had exams which are finished now and I’ve only just got round to looking at this, but I hope this helps ...

Hey Emm, I just read this and, since there are quite a few things that I liked about this but also a few flaws that I can point out, I ...

Hey again mystogan! Firstly, good work with this chapter: the first one drew me in enough to make me want to read this one, but now I’m really intrigued. I’m ...

Hey mystogan, I’m here with a review for you. :) I haven’t done this for a while so sorry if it all comes out a bit scrambled; I hope it ...

Hey again, Blues. ^_^ I really liked this chapter — Mustafa and Youssef are both pretty interesting characters and I like that you tell the story from their viewpoints as ...

Hey Blues. :) To start with I just want to say that this isn’t that bad. There are some things which could be improved etc but I know you know ...

Hey, wonder! I’m usually kind of wary of reading stories from the romance section because I always seem to end up reading the really terrible ones which are full of ...

Katu. :3 It’s taking me a long time to write this review, and it still probably won’t be one of the most helpful reviews ever, because, as I’m pretty sure ...

Hey methrirr123, I really liked this. It’s quite a dark subject, and you matched that well in your tone; I loved some of the descriptions, and despite knowing little about ...

Hey mnkeygrl11, This is quite interesting, and I enjoyed reading it. I like your ideas; the supernatural camp, the fights, etc. I’m particularly interested about Nora - who is she, ...

Hey xRAINBOWQUEENx, I’ve just read this and I have a few suggestions to make as to what you could do to improve it, so I’ll post them here in a ...

Hey xxFleetingEternity, First of all, I think you’ve got a really nice story here. I like the characters; both seem quite defined, especially Ruth as quite a fragile, broken character ...

Hey PrettyInPink, I’m going to be pretty critical here and say, first of all, that I found this quite disappointing. That’s not to say that the ideas here aren’t good, ...