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Asking me to list the names of my favorite books is like asking how many hairs are on my head. 1. The 13 and 1/2 Lives Of Captain BlueBear by ...

Light Devil this is amazing! I'm not just saying this because I do a storybook with you. Although what does that have to do with this? I don't know. You ...

Hello, Randomer. Welcome to YWS! Well, I have to say you are awesome! Seriously, for a thirteen year old you're pretty good. Alright today I'm going to review a different ...

Alright here I am reviewing for you. So far this is the best chapter! For me at least. You gave lots of description form the beginning. Which is fantastic! In ...

Hello and salutations, Classy! Well it seems everyone has gotten all the major stuff so I'm just here to encourage you. You're getting better at description! I've noticed. And your ...

Oh my God. And I thought Part 1 was amazing! This was even better! You potray emotions very well, that's a talent that some writers take a while to learn. ...

Hello, Classy. I didn't find any major errors and yes I don't the basis of the story yet. But that can be a good or bad thing. Readers can get ...

Well, Classy, 3icanbefixed practically corrected everything so there isn't much that I can do. I am impressed how you switched into present tense without difficulty and you had better description ...

Am I allowed to swear here cause man, this was amazing! Well, in my opinion it was. It gave me chills. Which is a good thing. I couldn't catch any ...

Hello Classy. First thing first congratulations on trying present tense, but I have to tell you you have to add a bit more description. Example: I shake my head, stand ...

My goodness this is brilliant! I read the first Tale of the Two Kings and I thought it was good but this is even better. But I must say I ...

Awesome! I love it! I was to engrossed in the story to see any errors. Although you had to flip to the past a bit it was still engrossing. Beautiful ...

I absolutely loved this piece! I did't find anything wrong with it (then again I was completely sucked into the story) I like where this is going... I couldn't excatly ...

Peculiar. If I might criticize well this is a review. I just want to know how old she is. I need more scenery, like when she walks out of the ...

This was what it was supposed to be soulless. Just a few corrections you do not hyphen soulless. Lonliness is spelled with an i not y that also goes for ...