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Cool! thanks a million, @Aley. this is the sort of stuff i was looking for. my other poem isn't much better tho sooo don't expect major improvement in that department. ...

Thanx for the review!

thanx for the review @AlexSushiDog. yeah, i was kind of thinking that it was kind of sudden. I'm still working on fixing that line. Oh and I see that i've ...

Good Work! I like how it focuses on our ancestors preparing us for the world ahead.

freezingwreck, you mentioned a Bible verse that talked about the ordering of the slaughter of an entire tribe of people. I remember that verse because when I first read it ...

You're Welcome! :) Happy New Year, hun!

why would i bite ur head off?

What do you mean by, one see the other? (Thanx for the feedback. It is unlikely she would immediately notice him.)

oh no! You're fine. I've heard much worse believe me. I think criticism is great. It helps you work your hardest and so it brings out the best you have ...

So, any particular principle you're talking about? I'd like to know what i need to fix. Thanx! :)

thanx! I'll have to fix that :)

thanx for the tips!! I was really looking for stuff like this. I plan to keep on writing. I've got a few new chapters nearly completed so you'll be able ...