-
Re: Of Love Defiant
Hey! victorianbeauty here to give you a review! :) So I read the piece and immediately felt that it was about a hopeless love. Beautiful!! :) So, down to the ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: I drew my name in chalk
Hey it's your sis here to bother you!! Actually, I'm going to give a singularly awesome review and you're going to love it. ;) Anyways, this was a very beautiful ...
Jun 6, 2014 -
Re: Koala's Climb
Hey! Victorianbeauty here to give a review :) Hope I help with any and all problems that you may have. So, let's just jump right in. In the second line: ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: The Drive Home
Hey! Victorianbeauty here to give a review! So, I like how original this poem is. It flows while still being chopped up, if that makes any sense. One thing I ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: A Love Affair with Orange Juice
This is simply briliant! I love the way you make it seem like a passionate love between two people when all the while it's just about......orange juice! My favorite line ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Silver Lining In The Sky
Great Song! I really like the lyrics here. I can really see it being put to a song. I like how realistic it is, but it still has a whimsical ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Recipe for a Good Life
Hi, victorianbeauty here to give you a review! I love pieces like this. They are full of meaning but are still light-hearted enough to really make you laugh. I read ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: I Hope Your Appendix Explodes
Wow! Somebody does not like Valentine's Day! Regardless, I still loved this piece, even thought I do like Valentine's Day. :) OK, down to the review. "I hated you and ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Child of the Night
I LOVE IT!!!! This is sooo beautifully written! I really like how well you write about being a part of the darkness. It makes the dark seem a little less ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Anchor that gave way
HI! Happy Review Day! victorianbeauty here to give you a review. Great Work! I love you eloquently you put life and change, how well you describe the feelings people have ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: "The Truth about Hamsters"
I seriously laughed the whole way through this story! Hamsters Being Evil?!?! That is just too good. :D lol Your story was extremely entertaining and creative. Like @Bol says, I ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: How To Catch A Cold With A Butterfly Net
Hey, Victorianbeauty here for a review! This is a great work. I always love to see whimsical poems that at first sight appear to be made up of completely unconnected ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Freedom
Absolutely Beautiful! Hi, victorianbeauty here for a review, my first of Review Day! This is a very inspirational poem that would truly appeal to the staunch American heart! One small ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Mentor
Great Job! I love how well you describe "The Mentor". You really do get pictures in your head. OK, down to the review. :) This phrase here: "almost the same ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Company
Wow! This is one of the most intense pieces I've ever read. You write it as if you've actually had experience with people having heart surgery! I really like how ...
Jan 23, 2014
