Newmoon38

First off congratulations on your first post and welcome to YWS! :-) This is a very deep, great poem and it's obvious you put thought and emotion behind this. That ...

This is a great poem and I feel a connection with it. I can understand how ferocious and cruel the demons in one's mind can be. It's a horrible feeling ...

Overall your piece well written and I can get a hint of its true voice. Don't take what I'm about to say to harshly. There are a couple of critiques ...

This was a really great beginning to, I hope, an even better story. The imagery was fantastic. Being blessed (or cursed depending on the day) with a great imagination and ...

I really love the simplicity of how you wrote this poem. You've successfully described a high-school dance with the one you care about. I'm pretty sure you have great grammar ...

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I love your use of imagery, and your descriptions. With that being said I have one critique; generally the first letter of each line ...

The voice of this novel is taking shape really well. I like the whole outcast, mad, mechanic, suspected witch the female is taking on. I have one thing to point ...