NerdBird

Hi there! Your friendly neighbourhood Nerd Bird here for a review! I liked this! A very good alternate version of the creation story, though I must say I favour yours ...

Wow! What a chapter :D I definitely want to know more about these elementals and I want to know now :D Love the imagery at the beginning of the scene ...

Your friendly neighbourhood Nerd Bird here for a review! :) "I push my long tangles of russet coloured hair from my amber eyes" Too much colour descriptives, im sure you ...

Hi! You're friendly neighbourhood Nerd Bird here for a review! I loved this, purely because I was left with a hell of a lot questions but a huge picture of ...

Very easy read and very well formatted! :) Only problem I did manage to find was a minor spelling mistake: embarressed > embarrassed. But other than that it's all solid! ...

Nerd Bird here to be nerdy and...birdy? Heres my review :) Altogether, the descriptions are very good, I love the medieval style town, but I felt like the airsoft game ...

Going to review as I read ;D against its very will I feel as if the 'very' isnt needed here, interrupts the flow of words for me personally. I love ...

Not much ti say that others haven't already! But I loved how romantic it all sounds right up until the last moment where we're reminded that, yes, he is being ...

Now, you really are evil aren't you? :P Very disappointing, was expecting a real good juicy horror story to review just in time for ole Hallow's eve. Alas! I must ...

I walked over to the small window above the kitchen sink to look out of the small window that rested over it. And when I noticed the lightning cutting a ...

Helping you with grammar/mistakes and the like here :) Everything in ' ' is a word change or spelling correction :) "Falling. falling through what seems like an endless void ...

Re-iterating what other have said. This could be a viable prologue, its short, to the point and pi piques interest. It's very fast-paced, and because of that there may not ...

There are quite a few spelling mistakes and unnecessary words as others have already pointed out but I was completely entranced by this. Much like Sean by the sounds of ...

This is really well written! Some grammar is lost in the moments where you've clearly got carried away int he excitement, much like i was reading it but that doesnt ...