NeoAnderson

this poem is good for a first try! you have talent in poetry so keep writing!

i liked the poem 1. you lost way a bit by talking about churches 2.i liked the flowery alliteration 3.you used some great words 4. it was very creative 5. ...

wow! this was a great poem 1. it was very creative 2. it was funny 3.even though it was short i enjoyed it a lot 4.loved your spelling mistakes there ...

i really liked the poem. 1. some rhymes were very good. 2. it is short but it still is able to convey so much 3. i think a longer poem ...

its a great poem. it has a good flow. 1.i loved the way you started with pessimism but ended with optimism. keep writing

this poem is really mysterious. i could not understand what you were trying to convey in this poem. there were a few grammatic errors here and there. i think you ...

its a nice poem. i liked it. but for some reason i couldn't relate to it so much. dont worry its, not a bad poem, but a little more practice ...

its a good poem. but i think the ending can be improved. keep on writing!

this is a good poem. you have expressed your emotions very well. i cant imagine what your going through,but every emotion that comes will in due time, pass.

i really liked this poem. i can totally relate to it. i think the flow of the poem can be improved. putting more rhyming words may help but its your ...

great poem. it simple but it is very good. i liked and i found it funny too. waiting for more work from you.

Great poem. Loved everything about it. some of the rhymes were good. specially the got and lot part. in short, it was awesome.