Necromancer14

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I have trouble with remembering to capitalize a lot. And also I had "tv show" in my brain when I began writing this, so that's ...

Thanks for the review! And yeah, descriptions were never my strong suit.

Thanks for the review! I see you've caught me on some typos XD

Thanks! I was wondering how people were doing those quote things.

It's fine to sometimes not adhere exactly to the rules of grammar??? O_O I learned something today too, then. :)

Actually, never mind. My first suggestion wouldn't work.

Oh. I suppose I'm wrong then...

EDIT: adding the predicate would turn it into an independent clause, not a dependent clause.

Actually, what you said that you needed to do to fix it is what I meant to say. (For some reason though I said to use "they instead of "he". ...

In my grammar textbook, it said a common mistake people do is just use commas to connect clauses, which, you do need a comma, but you also need something like ...

Your welcome! And grammatical errors are the easiest for me to catch, so I'm glad you found my review helpful

No problem

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Okay, yeah, that orients me a bit. In that case, I think "got" should technically be "gotten" then. I'm not sure though. Please correct me if I'm wrong.