Necromancer14

Since this has been at the bottom of the green room for a while, I decided I might as well review it. So here's my review: "on a staring contest ...

This is quite an interesting story! Here's my review: "talk or even blink.Rohan observed Aurnob intensely." "blink.Rohan"? I think you meant to put a space in-between the words. You have ...

Wow. This was fantastic. I really liked the genius idea of having machine to make you lose a part of yourself that you don't want, it's a rather terrifying notion. ...

Well, this was quite good! I like how the guy struggles with himself about whether he will climb the mountain or not. "Like an endless cycle, I was caught in ...

Well! this was quite interesting! I like it. "“Look at me. I am not a hero. I am not ruthless. I am a survivor, plain and simple. I am a ...

This was great! It was quite funny. ""Oi, is this game jinxed or something..?" Now Ruri was a little scared. So was Shou." I like this part. It was whimsical ...

Well! This was very interesting. The idea of a robot that seems to have ADHD and absent-mindedly watches cities getting nuked is very interesting. "11,000 assignments to do right now ...

Wow. This was super superbly done, good job! Great use of vocabulary. I really like your use of words, like "North wind," "Chaos," "unrelenting," and "loomed," so many awesome words. ...

Nice poem! I like how there is humor slipped into the praise of Maggie_Doodle. "with hints of red in her coat" I like the use of words. "hints" and "coat" ...

Hello, here's my review. First of all, this was hilarious. Writing about losing ideas is extra funny because ideas have to do with writing, so it makes it all the ...

I really liked this story. It was hilarious, and it reminded me of my eighth grade brother who hates math. The first paragraph poses a question and help draw the ...

I liked this; very romantic! Here's my review: critiques: For one thing, you didn't put spaces between a lot of your punctuation. ""I promise I will not let your death ...

Interesting! You learn more about Patrick in this chapter and you meet some new characters. Besides, as Patrick now argued in her place when the story was told at family ...

Very interesting! You learn a bit more about the zoo in this chapter. Critiques: I feel like nothing really happens in this chapter. It's Patrick being nervous about the panda ...

Wow... this was a very interesting story, and sad, too. It reminded me of the Lord of the Flies, if you know what I mean, only shorter. The concept that ...