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Re: angel
A super poem! First, I like the way you described the life-and-death complex. People usually view death as some big, scary evil. But you viewed it as some gate to ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: White Wolf
My hat's off to you and your 'wolfish' poem :D It is unprecedented that you talked about an emotional experience with a wolf in your poem. Others generally see wolves ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: Companion
A wonderful sonnet! First, I like how you managed to use the Shakespearean sonnet in a modern sense to describe love; its highs, its lows, its intimacy, its commitment...etc. Awesome! ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: Bottled Up Emotions
Excellent! You really did a great job! I don't even understand why you described your poem as crappy.. :P Anyhow, I like how you wrote yourself into the poem. It ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: I Never Would Have Made You Choose
A nice, straight-forward, sentimental poem full of emotions. The poem talks about post-breakup pain. 'Person X' regrets having stood up to their friend/lover, and having told them to 'choose'. To ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: Star-Crossed Lovers
A magnificent, heartbreaking poem.. First, the imagery in this poem is really, really touching and significant. In the second stanza, The equation of 'the male lover' with 'the sun' and ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Bloodlust Thoughts
An unprecedented poem about a subject that poets rarely write on. Psychopathy and murder. You managed to describe what goes on inside a sadistic serial killer's mind accurately. Bingo! First, ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: 3D Hearts
A wonderful take on the meaning and essence of love! "Love doesn't get tempered easily by wrongs, but doesn't celebrate sins." An eleven-word line with a thousand meanings! It tells ...
Feb 2, 2016
