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Navita

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: And I’ll give you chocolate

    Oh...here we go again! A bit of mental gymnastics for me, and I still haven't figured out the one with the cheese and the mirrors - I commented on the ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I am me.

    I didn't get much from reading this. The short stanzas seemed stunted, making the 'identity' concept likewise seem stunted as well. 'I am me' - and so what? We KNOW ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Chevrolet

    Oh, wow ! Can't believe I only just came across this. And this is one of the rare few poems I feel like I have nothing to say about except ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    I've read too many really amazing books to say which is the 'best'. I thought this thread was about choosing ONE book as the best, but most people seem to ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    I would have to agree with many others on here. I'm quite an aivd reader, with a keen eye for detail, and if the beginning doesn't hook me, I put ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: God: Just a theory of the biggest question chapter 1.1

    I love it when I come across something written cleverly and for a light bit of amusement. And even more so when the writer pulls it off well. I don't ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: The Ultimate Critique

    Yeah, nah, this was FUNNY start to finish! I wondered what I was getting myself into, starting to read this. Then, I realised what it was - and it is ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: May Day

    Oh oh ! You write vividly, with a keen sense of imagery and imagination, and leave no detail mysterious. It's bright and alive and just real as a result. And, ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I need you

    I'm not going to say that the idea is not original, because you know this already. The thing is, to present a familiar idea in poetry, you've really got to ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ace in the Hole

    As a poem, this didn't grab my attention much by way of interesting imagery or any kind of comprehensive plot. It seemed a lot more like song lyrics to me ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kill Me Slowly

    I don't know if it's just my mood or what, but 'Kill me slowly' seemed to have an immediate heavy feeling to it - long and drawn out without you ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: On The Way From The Beach

    To captain.classy and Tenyo, I'd like to point out that many poems are written for the pure purpose of capturing the moment, the description, the instant, the experience . need ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Boy

    Interesting topic - something I've considered often; intellect vs instinct. But not as cleverly and subtly pulled off as it could have been. Too obvious, especially in the line, 'Moral ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Where I'm From

    I'd have to disagree with KatTrain on that one - I have not seen any 'where I'm from' poems, ever! So...I wondered if we were going to bring up the ...

    May 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Navita

    To everyone above who said they didn't have a clue - I'd say go read this UnknownPoet's 'Ham, Cheese and Pickle' poem. Then rethink your commments. So...only I understand why ...

    May 4, 2010


You are in the wrong land even if the roosters recognize you.
— Nathalie Handal, "Noir, une lumière"