NathanielC

I don't even know where to begin, when my mind tried to dissect all of this! You have the makings to become a very good lyric writer! This sounds like ...

This is really interesting. I can almost sense a bit of anger in her. She seems to have a bit more sentiment and thought in her as opposed to other ...

I appreciate your input, I honestly do. It makes me happy that you'd take the time out to reach to me. However, I feel the expression "Easier said than done" ...

I find great irony, reading this now that I'm on the polar opposite of the scale you were on to have written this. I feel like I'm reading a wish ...

I tried, over and over. But all I got was Error 404 on this one! Good brain buzzer, though. Gave me something tricky to solve today! Nice!

Wowowweewow! I did mess up the senses Dx Good point! I should be more precautions with this, Thanks! And when I say pluck forehead, I mean like. Flick, with a ...

I really appreciate the review! I'm very glad you pointed out the grammar mistakes, I have a tendency to rush recklessly when I get one of those "waves of inspiration" ...

Alright. I do appreciate the impute and corrective help, but perdido, I think you didn't exactly see what I meant in the line, Morning brings a real smile, one worth ...

Many, Many thanks! I was in a very different mood when I wrote this.. So I gave it my best shot! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it! Muchos gracias, ...

Thank you! I can see how you thought this may have been a song inspired thing; because it was! The poem itself is not really similar to the song at ...

I can see what you mean now. Perhaps it was a bit to far-fetched to take a small experience like that and try to convert it into a full blown ...

Much appreciated! I feel overjoyed to see that you picked up on what I tried to convey with this. It's something that comes out of personal experience as well as ...

And by the way, it's not just a story. It's not a character, either. This WAS my 12'th birthday.

Thanks, but that was just a bit too harsh, bro. I get that you're trying to help, but it's not like you should feel offended either.