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Hey! So Widdershins already commented on quite a few elements of this poem which I agree with. The rhyme is forced, and it makes for an awkward, slow read. A ...

So, I realise that you have had some not so complimentary reviews. I understand that this ws a colab, and they can be really good at times, others, not so ...

Alright, This is a sweet poem, and I rather enjoyed it. But there are a few things I will like to comment on. First, your use of punctuation isn't consistent. ...

Ok, This is good. You show control of your chosen form, and given that it is a poem of no traditional form that can be hard to achieve. You have ...

Hey! So, this is an interesting and confusing piece. It isn't bad but I feel as if it can be fixed up a bit. First: It doesn't seem like a ...

Hello! So, I'm going to review this like I would a poem or short story. I know you may not have posted it wanting a review but I'm going to ...

Hey! So, this is an interesting poem, and I really enjoyed it. I don't have too many problems with it, it is humorous and also serious at the same time. ...

Hey, You are going to have to bare with me because I'm not one for reviewing stories often. But I will give this a good go. This is really sweet, ...

Hey! So, this is my first review in a while, so congratulations you get to be the lucky recipient of most likely a mediocre review. Nah, I'll do my best! ...

Guys, it's satire. And Ialreadydied has done it incredibly well. I love it. Seeing the title I was ready to go on a full rant. But wow! I don't need ...

I really like this poem. It offers a great perspective on abortion and why many do it. It's interesting that you wrote this poem and Deanie wrote one a few ...

Hey! This is great. It is a bit fragmented at times, as you pointed out, but it is still really good. I liked the ending the best. Now, I'm not ...

Yo! Yo! Yo! Get down! Ok, let's get down and do some reviewing!!!!! So, this is A+++. You have a great voice in this, and the simplicity of it makes ...

Ok, so interesting story. You have a rather nice idea, but the execution isn't what it could be. Now, I haven't reviewed prose in a while so I may be ...

Yay! HP poem! Ok, this is good, it's not fantastic but it's good. I like the way you portrayed all the houses with the good qualities, because every house has ...