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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Chronicles Of Color

    Well, It's creatively Unique! i loved it..... Keep up, can't wait for more pieces! :D

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Chronicles Of Color

    I agree with Tamara .. you need to make it longer to make a complete scene of the poem. it's good.... Keep up :D

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Time.

    it's sad, you need to slightly increase the flood of emotions with words...... but i felt it it's very good. Keep up the good work...:D:D

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Never succumb

    Loved it, amazing, great................ i want more of this. like a daily dose Keep up, it's totally promising !!!! More please.:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just Listen...

    i am with the last reviewers . it's repetitive and got no aim in the end......... but keep up, show us more :D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Hate Love Poems

    I love it, love it, love it,............... Keep up,............i like it the way it's..

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The After

    very good, naturally reflected to me ....................Keep up, :D:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: What A Lovely Life

    Very good, the style is very rich.......... the stories mixed to complete a great scene!!! thumbs up, keep up your work :D:D:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Make Believe

    Standing ovation!!!! :D:D:D i like it very much :D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unknown Love

    GOOD JOB, keep up....................:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Weakness

    I like it alot.................very good, Keep up the work i enjoyed the ending:D:D

    Apr 22, 2011


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