NICOKEACOLA

I did like how simple this poem was, and you did a great job with the rhyme scheme. I actually didn't notice it until my second read-through; it sounded so ...

I found the message behind our poem immensely fascinating and i really liked our use of rhetoric- it made me ponder on the message you were trying to portray and, ...

This was a lovely read I really felt it was very emotive and you used great imagery- keep it up well done. Just a nit pick... In the morning when ...

I've read a few of your poems and they are all well written and extremely captivating. Personally this is my favourite just reading it made me feel peaceful also I ...

You have mastered the use of quick wit- the last stanza was particularly amusing. I also like how you break you lines in half; Lick the sun, ravish the earth, ...

I really enjoyed your motif of time. The repetition of 4am gave a sense of structure amongst the unorganised rhyme and rhythm which i felt really illustrated the sort if ...

I have to disagree with the above comment on your use of 'fuck'. Personally I feel that the use of the profanity give a feeling of the building up of ...