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Thanks!!!! I'll definitely make the changes you suggested. I'm glad you liked it :D

Thank you! I so glad you liked this :D

Wow.... I'm honestly speechless. This is just beautiful. Definitely good enough to be published. Just... amazing. AMAZING!!!!! Keep writing, please. You're great at it.

Thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it!!!

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it :D

Thank you so much! This is something that really came from my heart, so it means so much to me that it moved you :)

Thanks!!! I sympathies with you when you say you're battling depression. As you can probably tell, I'm going through a very rough period now, too. I never realized before how ...

Wow, thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :) I was inspired to write this mainly because all the girls at my school have started to become very ...

Beautiful :). Very descriptive, with a great flow. A bit repetitive, but I don't mind it much. Keep writing :D

I honestly REALLY liked this! I actually didn't think it was that rough. Not perfect, but still great. I loved the idea :D

Haha, I actually love this! Very creepy.... reminds me of Halloween :)

Thanks, Max. I'm really glad you enjoyed this piece. I struggled with it, slightly, and it's a relief that you think it turned out well :D

Thank you! I really needed a good constructive review for this piece, and this is honestly very helpful. I'll definitely take a look at your suggestions :)

Oh, I didn't know that. Thanks for telling me :)

Beautiful. Honestly, stunningly beautiful. Don't change a thing :)