MyersRockin

I liked the idea of your poem. There are a few technical errors ,already pointed out ,so you need to keep a look on will improve your writing and will ...

Do have a look on my other poem " Dark Out" ...

Thanks, and i will try to add more lines to it :-)

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Myers is here with a review, Honestly,i was rapping the lyrics and it was actually very good.Most of rappers satire on some girls and i think that your song would ...

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Well, it is good piece but I think that the rhythm broke when you changed the rhyming scheme from the word " Cloud" to " Hot". But still it is ...

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Thanks Dear I am happy to see you review.

Thanks , your review has inspired me to prepare myself for writng a new poem.

sad.

ahhahahaha it kept me in suspense about its topic.

I am also confused .

It does not stike me much .

I would really appreciate some guidance for improvement.