Muzzammil

Got it!

Well i never fight on dc or marvel ....enough to dig a grave , i was using this sentence to say that he can kill you or he can send ...

Thank you , yeh i got it what you are trying to say.

Yeh .

Hey horisun, Muzzammil here for a reviem. The poem is very beautiful and touching . There is a big message behind , if though nobody else could see it but ...

Ok , thanks %u263A

%u263A%u263A

Thank you very much alliyah , i have noted all my mistakes and i will try to cover them next time .

Ok

Thank you , i really can't thinknof a title but i will try , thanks for the review.

Thank you very much , ihave corrected the mistakes you mentioned

Thanks ! Yeh i thought about the title too , can you recommend any other?

Ok , that's good . You can also visit my profile , i am very attached to poems as well

Thanks for the review and pointing out my mistakes. I will cover them in next poem

Thank you for the review , i have noted my mistakes and will try to cover them next time.