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Re: One in a million
Welcome to yws first off I'm not really good at reviewing poetry. Just wanted to say maybe does not have a space between it, I didn't know if it was ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: If I ever,
:) Loved it. It's a little to short for me but thats what you were going for it seems like. I write poetry, I dont really review it but i ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: You can't be replaced, but I can be erased
I can actually feel the how he/she feels like with this one person she could be what ever this person wanted and it would never be enough for them. You ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: I met a girl Today (revised)
Love, love, love. At first I didn't understand who the girl was and I love the imagery of this poem. It has a good feel about it and I love ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Feelings I can't Ignore
Hello my name is MusicAndWritingSpeak and I'll be your reviewer today. I agree with what deirdredawne said they should be spaced out like in paragraphs sorta
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: I Live On The Shore.
I loved this poem, but where you talking about a sandcastle you live in because it sounded a little like that. I'm not a very good reviewer. I enjoyed it, ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: The Job of the Writer
I'm not really good at writing reviews but U have to say I really enjoyed this pice. I like how you portrayed what it's like to be a writer.
Dec 4, 2010