Murmurations

I love the simplicity and direct message of this. It reminds me of one of my favorite bands Sigur Ros. Their lyrics are mostly minimal, but you can feel the ...

The imagery here was interesting. At first I was taking the poem literally, but the end made me see it as also a metaphor. It makes me think that "leaving ...

Haha I really like this! It seems like a fun sing to listen to while in the car with your friends. The flow is nice and natural and it would ...

First of all, sorry if i repeat anything since I haven't read the comments! I could empathize with you in the beginning and was reminded of something I'd write while ...

I wish this was longer because the setting of the story interested me! The only thing I really have to criticize is the almost frequent use of "paddock". You used ...

I love this! It's such a fun song. It seems like a summer song :D This reminds me a bit of my earlier songs because it's full of different images. ...

Wow, this is wonderful! Haha. Thank you so much for this. I've always loved the idea of getting to know your characters and creating a whole background for them, even ...

The beginning made me feel what you were saying. It was very clear and throughout the poem I didn't feel like it was forced in any way. I got a ...

I agree with MillarS. Also, I like how the song wasn't just 100 percent negative feelings. There was awareness about your situation. You KNOW you need to improve it. At ...

This was well written! The only nitpick I had was you using the word "cotton" again to describe the snow. However, it still makes me imagine what you wanted me ...

Well, this certainly is dark. I haven't read any of your other works so I can't compare, but I liked this. It flowed well in my opinion and painted a ...

I must say, I can't really follow what's going on. I was getting a bit of a mental image in the beginning, but then the story went off somewhere else. ...

Wow, I loved this! I looked forward to finding out what was next! I hope you continue this story. The only thing I was a bit confused about was the ...

Well, there's not much I can say that Alliyah already didn't. The story didn't really develop enough for me to get a picture of what was actually happening. It seems ...