MrTalljoker

First and foremost, I don't know how much of this is based or inspired by true events or if it was all fabricated and I'm not going to assume either, ...

Short and sweet, I think. Maybe. Probably? Yeah. I guess. I theorize? There seems to be a story here, I have no idea what the story is, but it's there. ...

Dear, Thecolorofthesky I have to say, I don't like this poem. I just feel it's something that is so drenched in this typical "I'M A POET!" form. I feel the ...

Seems like a good couple. Jokes aside, you have a prett good foundation here that I feel needs a bit more focus. What I mean by that is you have ...

Okay, so I have no idea what is going on in this piece. I've reread it a few times just to see if I maybe wasn't getting the full picture, ...

Dear BenFranks, You know when I saw this, I instantly thought of that one scene from Spike Lee's "Malcolm X". It's the scene where Malcolm is being shown a dictionary ...

MrTalljoker here, to be a total prick: Just to get this out of the way, when I was done reading this, that one Bo Burnham joke kept coming up in ...

Hey, It's MrTalljoker, here to review and nit pick. So I can safety say, I have no idea what's going on, but I'm a dumb guy, so that could be ...

Dear Rissymay, As I was searching the contents of new material of YWS, I came along and saw your poem, and thought. "I haven't read a poem in a while, ...

Dear priceofwords, I have to say, that I'm certainly interested to read future parts, for it seems you have an interesting story, or should I say, stories. This is obviously ...

Dear Jadefox, This piece is certainly a nice example of an exercise, I would't call a work because it's just you practicing using a mechanic, which is fine, I do ...

Dear Kylie, Honestly I have to say, I like the idea of this story. Its a quirky love story with a slight comedic view. I think you have an impressive ...

Dear Seastormy, I like this poem your words are quite good, but there's a slight problem. I don't feel like there's much purpose to any of these words, and while ...

Dear Pencil2Paper, I must say that I'm quite fond of this poem, I like the message, although simple, is effectively excited have anger for the begging explanation and kindness for ...

Dear ArianaSarroyo, I do like this poem, of cores I don't agree with the spiritual beliefs stated and hinted at within it, I shall not let this draw from what ...