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Re: High Dive
I was about to make a review but my mom told me don't talk to strangers. I decided to come in the middle of the night to make the review(That's ...
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Re: The Life Of Kronus, Part 1. The Adventure Begins.
Well, I didn't mean to come here, the title was boring to me, just another diary, i thought. But when I DID get here, I was about to hit the ...
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Re: Man on Fire
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Sep 27, 2015
WOAH! Is this a true story or just some WOAH baloney? if you made it up you're smart and if you didn't you're well..smart. Oh yeah, there's a story gotta ... -
Re: you wonder why your scars are disjointed; she plays the blues to soothe her soul
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Sep 27, 2015
ON FIRE! REVIEW DAY IS HERE! Hi. I hope that was a nice greeting. Just wanted to point out: of Cordoba, Syria and Rome. Was good. I know you're smart. ... -
Re: No Romance: Chapter 10
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Sep 27, 2015
Hey! Review day, eh? Gotta make some reviews! Nice avvie, did you draw that by yourself? ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// Mist -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eleven
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Sep 27, 2015
WOAH! This is a long chapter, took me a while. Now since I have not read any of your past chapters, this review will mainly focus on this chapter. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////// -
Re: One Mistake
Hey! Review day coming soon, so here's a review! I will correct mistakes: I'm an idiot. I'm so stupid, should be: I'm such a stupid idiot. Also I don't get ...
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Re: Tumbling Down the Stairs
Hey! Mr Muddy Pig here! Now since this poem is short same goes with this review. Oh and by the way WELCOME TO YMS! Ok this has a nice ryhme ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.3]
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Sep 22, 2015
Hi! MrMuddyPig here! The title is ok, but instead of bad lights, good lights I think its better to reverse it and put something like: ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// -
Re: you are my indian summer
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Sep 20, 2015
Hey! Mr Muddy Pig here! Lets go fix some mistakes! Well, first off the title, FIRST LETTER NEEDS TO BE CAPTIAZLED.(I am capping not because I am mad, but because ... -
Re: The Alphabet of our Love
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Sep 20, 2015
Nice! I liked how you described every letter except x! Poor X! Why couldnt you put mark the red X? That means to make joy to a heart! No Mistakes! ... -
Re: Five Essential Souls
*Looks at the floor* This is fun! *Looks at the computer* Oh! It's the jelly guy again! What's he up to now, and thats how I am here making a ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 2
*looks at the sky" Wow, very intersting! *Looks on computer* Oh! A second chapter good, I will read it and review it! Hey MrMuddyPig here! I don't get what you ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: Cold Hearted -- Chapter 1
Hey! Mr Muddy Pig here! The first sentence has some trouble. 'Investigate the strange goings-on in the mountains,' they said. 'It'll be an adventure,' they said. 'Fun and exciting, and ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Science at large
This is great, now write down a new textbook! Just kidding. This was some great imformation by the way, will help me on the test. I will list down some ...
Sep 15, 2015
