MrBrainwasher

No you didn't change POV. Yeah, you did changed sentences from "I turned to look at her" to "she is smiling..." I don't think that's acceptable. By alluring, I meant ...

That I suck at maths?

Thanks for the review, a very good one from a newcomer. Welcome to YWS!

Thanks for the review, I agree, I should have put a note about the currency thing. Well, 1crore=10million and 1$= Rs67.5

Thanks for the review. Since it is a local newspaper in India, I thought of writing Indian currency and terms only. Thanks again, your review surely gonna help.

I am little confused here, correct me "You’ll probably never know that we’re in this together. Your cousin, seventeen-year-old you, seven-year-old me." What is he talking about? He meant, he ...

More power to you and your characters! To the supet minivan!

Bahut bahut dhanyawad! Thank you for an honest review _/\_

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I seriously didn't notice, it was your work! I'm happy it was you, who wrote this

Thank you!

Thanks for such a helpful review!

You're just like the name you got "anus"

okay

yeah!