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Re: A jar of glowworms and stale memories
KAMAS. WHAT'S. UP. So...Kamas writes poetry, huh? Wait, you did the Leather Shoes thing right? Oh! I guess you're not such a n00b after all. ;) Sidewalks Definitely like this ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Ace in the Hole
Hi Howler! I'm here to review. So, I think I like this! The rhyme scheme is great, not forced or anything. The idea behind it is angry, I think, and ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: The War Inside My Head
Hi Kingolions! I'm here to review. Well, I think you have a good start here. It's a fresh topic to read about, which is always a good thing. :) However, ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Six ~ Part One)
Hiya Skins! Sorry for the late review. D: Well, every time you say you don't quite like something you've written, it always turns out awesome! This was no exception...actually, it's ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Silent Fury
Hi! I'm here to review. :) Well, I do like the idea you have behind this, but I think your poem lacks conviction. Not a very big deal, but it ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Are these the answers to life?
Okay, well...I have no idea what you're saying. This is complete gibberish to me. I am finding it impossible to understand what you are trying to convey, and even what ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Sydney (A quickwrite)
Well, for such a short story, I think you managed to put a lot of emotion into it. It's something that I've never really seen before (a story about pregnancy), ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: What's... ?
Hi Darth! I seem to be bumping into you a lot...Are you following me? xD So! Your poem. I actually really liked it! Sometimes you'll find that rhyming poems are ...
Apr 28, 2010 -
Re: Aristotle's Collection of Couplets and Tongue Twisters
Hm...I like these! It has a general vibe that's similar to something Shel Silverstein would do, and I'm half expecting some crazy drawings to come out of the words, much ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Navita
Well, I'm going to agree with Graffiti and say that I have no idea what this is supposed to mean. I can obviously see that it's humorous, but it seems ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Circles. (Based off the song "Circles")
Irish! Hi! I'm here to review. ;) So first off, I loffs you for making a short story out of this song! *whispers* It's called "Circle" not "Circles". :smt003 Anyways, ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Twilight
I've tried to read that before, Rodhead. ;) It's huge! Never got around to it though. :/ BUT! A great series of Vampire books is the Noble Dead Saga, by ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: My Special Place
Hi DarthKay! Awesome name. ;) I'm here to review. Well, I think this was awesome! It's extremely original, in my opinion. Your imagery is nicely used, and makes me think ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Waiting For A Soldier
Hi Passion! I'm here to review! :D First off, this definitely needs to be separated into stanzas. Remember that, much like prose, poetry needs to start on new lines when ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Regret
Hey Ray! I'm here to review. Well, I did like the first half. It flows nicely, and sets you up for a nice, powerful ending. However, you seemed to lose ...
Apr 26, 2010