Mr.Knightley

Hey Jackle! I'm here to review. :) First off, this is really interesting. I didn't read your other, apparently related post, but by itself this is great anyways. Mistakes underlined, ...

Hiya, Hobbit! I'm here to review. Well, I think you have a good start towards a nice poem; your first two lines, for example, flow nicely and have a great ...

Pacific! Hi! I'm here to review. So, I really like this. You provide great imagery for me to work off of, such as the words "cerulean" and "vast." Overall, I'm ...

Hi Lakegirl! I have to say, your poetic skills belong to someone far beyond your age. Every line flows into the next, and each individual idea is well thought-out and ...

Hi Melrose! I'm here to review. I have to say, the more I think about this poem and read it over again, the more I like it. Your use of ...

Hi Dante! :D I'm here as requested. Okay, first off, I'm not quite sure how this is fantasy. The only thing I can see about it that might make it ...

Hi, Eli! :D Hm...I agree with Snoink: This is a good start, but might need a little tweaking. a snow-white blossom with a ring of silky petals. You do realize ...

Hey there, Casey! I'm here to review. I'm not going to go into nitpicks too much; it's not really important, and anything I might have said about them has already ...

Hi Aristotle! I'm going to have to agree with Elinor on this one; nothing about this really works for me. At first I thought that this was just some bizarre ...

Bond movies = WIN! Haha, I love Casino Royale...one of my favorites. I guess you, me and Hope make a trio, huh Ben? ;) Never read any of the books, ...

Hi Jon! I'm here to review. Well, I have to say, I think you have a great start here. I love how you put action into your poem by using ...

Hi AM! I'm here to review. Well, I'm going to be honest with you and say that I didn't like this. I feel that it needs a lot of work; ...

Hi there Fairy! I'm here to review. First off, I like your idea. It's very entertaining and somewhat different from the norm. However, I think the way you formatted this ...

Hi there! I'm here to review. :D First off, I'm with Esther here; I really liked this! It is fast paced and exciting, which is great for me. I like ...

Irie! This was awesome! I mean, completely original for sure. Great work. :D I'm not going to go much into nitpicks or any of that, not that there was much ...