Mr.Knightley

Hi there, Nephthys! I'm here to review as you requested. :D Let's get started. First off, I didn't find many nitpicks worth bringing up, so good job! I hate it ...

Hello! I am the somewhat-powerful Mr.Knightley, and I'm here to review your poem! Let's begin.... *evil laugh* :twisted: First off, I really like the idea you have here. I totally ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it so far. :) I'm not really digging your haiku, I'm afraid. I don't quite understand what you were trying to say, ...

Hey there, Azzman! I have to say I really enjoyed this. Your topic is one that I think many people can relate to, myself included. Though I may not see ...

Hi there bloomc! I'm here to review your poem. Let's get started! First off, I have to say I'm surprised at how much I enjoyed this! The way you phrased ...

Okay, so... Huh. I'm not really sure what to say about this. I mean, you have a nice idea, I suppose, but any good that I can see in this ...

This is interesting! I liked it very much. :) It's very similar to a haiku, which I enjoy. The imagery you used was vivid and clear to understand. Often times ...

First off, I have to say you should really take this more slowly. At the pace you're going right now everything's a bit rushed, and it takes away from what ...

So... I'll just say that your story took an unexpected turn at the end, and it made up a huge deal for the rest of... it. But hey, I did ...

Hola! Hmm... What can I say about this? I'm not quite sure what the poem was supposed to be about, but it might just be me. I did like how ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Mr.Knightley, and I'm here to review your work. Let's go... :P Well, I'm not quite sure what to make of this. If the ending ...

Hi there! I'm here to review! :D their eyes were covered so they'd not see the pain that visited me and thee First off, I really like the first line. ...

Hey there, Halycon (that sounds so familiar). I'm here to review! Let's get going, shall we? First off, I think you have some major talent going on here. If you ...

I'm not sure what to say, since you're not really looking to improve this. :/ It was a little strange to read, but that may be because it's a rap, ...

I really liked this! I agree with Ms. Bellamy that every line was important, and you didn't drag on about this and that- you let it speak for itself. For ...