Morrigan

What do you think of my edits?

Thank you very much! I will do my best to clean up that second stanza. I did want to convey with the fruits that this character is not only very ...

Sorry I offended you. I just gave you my opinion, and that's the best I can do.

Writing is rewriting.

I don't think that you've quite got a handle on what ambiguous means. See, you leave huge places for it to be personalized, and that's not what poetry is about-- ...

the thing is, you're saying that the poet is wrong, when instead, it is a stylistic choice that belongs to the author. feel free to suggest it, but don't say ...

The thing about cliches is that everyone's heard them so often that they don't think about the metaphor anymore. They think directly about the meaning, and poetry is about expressing ...

Thx. I figured.

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Hello again! I agree with the sentiment here, but there are some issues with the execution. First of all, let's talk about ellipses. They're used in modern times to signal ...

No, I was talking about how the parents were the same. I understand the concept of children not looking like each other. I was just confused about how the parents ...

Thank you for your thoughts. I am glad that you at least had a reason for advising me to capitalize conventionally. That's all I really ask for. A pill bug ...

You didn't actually tell me to make it longer in your review. You said, "a short poem is good or bad. Look into it." That doesn't tell me to make ...

Actually, since I'm the one who wrote the poem, I don't know if I'll know which words you would like me to change if you don't point them out. Since ...

Limbo-- as in a place between, in this case heaven and earth. This has nothing to do with philosophy. However, the poem, as all poems are, is open to interpretation.

I chose stylistically to leave out the capitals, as it creates a different tone. If e.e. cummings did it, I think I can too! xD Thank you for your thoughts!