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Re: The Runner
Hey there, Alpaca! I'm dropping by to review your poem. This is the part where I simultaneously complement the way you used visuals to convey the feeling in your poem, ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: Memento Mori
Hey there, koinoyokan! I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem. I enjoy that you use poetic elements in this piece like personification and imagery. Death is a popular ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: blurry cracks
Heyo whatcha, Morri here to review your poem. I am so jealous of how you can dance around a subject with imagery and metaphor and get to the conclusion at ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: .
Hi R0nnie, I'm Morrigan, and I'm here to review your poem! Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. Comparing marijuana to a woman is an idea that ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: Higher Education
Hello, ShadowVyper! I'm here to review your poem! This is a cool concept. I appreciate what you've done here. You've essentially written two separate poems, but had them converge. I ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Snapshot
Hey Artie, here we go again. This poem is visceral, and I really appreciate the raw emotion that you've put into it. I love that though this poem is filled ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Greed
Hey Artie! A smol cute pome this time. Pros: + What an odd image. I love it. Eating a sparrow to absorb its beauty is something I've never come across. ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Negative 02
Hey, Artie, I'm gonna try to take this on. This is a really difficult poem to even touch. It's obviously very personal, and I feel like the purpose perhaps was ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Razor Blade / Open Palm
Hey Artie, here to review as requested. I'm doing quick reviews, so I'll give you some pros and cons, and what you can do about that. Pros: + Love the ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Monster
Howdy! Since you say you're rusty, I'll be sure to get my tetanus shots! Prose poetry is hard. It's hard to review, too. It's really devoid of any traditional poetic ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Wildflower
Hi, Oceans! We meet again! I am blown away at the improvement in the line breaks between this and the first poem you posted on YWS. This is so much ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Prayer to the Goddess- Apex Legends Fan Poem
Hello! Morrigan here for a quick review! You have some memorable imagery! "a mirror of a broken past" is my favorite. Galaxygem below touched on the other spot where you ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: birds in a hurricane
Hey there, Magebird. Morri here with a lil' review for you. Love the concept. You turn the birds into a symbol of fearlessness, while the girl is fearful, hiding inside. ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: deteriorating
Hello, JesseWrites! I don't believe we've met! I'm Morrigan, a poetry mod here on YWS. I've stopped by to review your poem. My review is filled with good intentions. First ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: Wednesdays
Hello oceans! Welcome to YWS! It's good to see new faces around here. I really enjoyed the poetic elements that you put into this poem. You really brought us into ...
Aug 1, 2020
