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Morrigan

  • Article / Essay » General, Other Re: Blue Lives Matter

    Hi. I noticed that below you mentioned that you didn't intend this to be an essay. I'm not sure, then, why this is filed under "Article/Essay?" Perhaps this rant would ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Spilled

    Heyo Mea, As one of the people drawn in by neon lights (I never wear heels, though), I actually found this quite interesting. I really love the way you use ...

    Jul 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why the nice guy?

    Hey, dude. All right, so I'm a woman. So you might just ignore the rest of my review because it's going to be honest. If you have to say you're ...

    Jul 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: For Another

    Ah, unrequited love. Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see new faces around. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I remember writing so many poems about ...

    Jul 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: Gunpowder and Orchids

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see new faces around. You're not alone in being inspired by the horrible attack on the Pulse nightclub in Orlando. I agree with ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Shame

    Hello, Sweater. I'll review this by section. Overall, I liked it. It feels raw and truthful. I think it's wonderful that you're writing these essay/memoirs. A Father's Company Your opening ...

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Epiphany

    Hello, MialyNire. I'm here to review your poem. I like the photograph at the top. Did you take it? If so, it's nice. It makes me feel calm. I I ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: They Met.

    Hello. I'm here to review your poem. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I don't really understand why you chose to bold some sections. I found ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: (Are You) Gay?

    Hello, Strange. Well, this certainly seems more serious than usual. It's about one subject. I'm guessing this is autobiographical? It seems very personal. I thought it might be a joke ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Content

    Hi there! This is really cute! I really like the sentiment that you're getting across in this poem. It sounds pretty good to me, too! You don't focus too much ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The White Hand

    Hello, LittleFox! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day today! Let's jump right in, shall we? I really like all of the imagery that you use in this poem. ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Accedere Lucem

    Hello! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day! Whoo! Go team go! To be honest, I don't know any Latin at all, but I can imagine that it sounds ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Free

    Hi there, AshleyDashley! I'm here representing Team Potter this review day to look at your poem! Whoopee! I'm glad that you feel that way about your Aunt! This is a ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Hippie Strikes Again

    After a long time avoiding this piece because I don't really know what to say about it, I'm here to give an unorganized, hunger-fueled review of it because it's review ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: He Did Not Die in Vain

    Hello, Lucy! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day! Whoo! Go team, go! Let's dive into your poem! This is obviously a very personal poem, and so I won't ...

    May 29, 2016


They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same.
— Kurt Cobain