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Re: Blue Lives Matter
Hi. I noticed that below you mentioned that you didn't intend this to be an essay. I'm not sure, then, why this is filed under "Article/Essay?" Perhaps this rant would ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Spilled
Heyo Mea, As one of the people drawn in by neon lights (I never wear heels, though), I actually found this quite interesting. I really love the way you use ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Why the nice guy?
Hey, dude. All right, so I'm a woman. So you might just ignore the rest of my review because it's going to be honest. If you have to say you're ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: For Another
Ah, unrequited love. Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see new faces around. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I remember writing so many poems about ...
Jul 1, 2016 -
Re: Gunpowder and Orchids
Hello! Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see new faces around. You're not alone in being inspired by the horrible attack on the Pulse nightclub in Orlando. I agree with ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Shame
Hello, Sweater. I'll review this by section. Overall, I liked it. It feels raw and truthful. I think it's wonderful that you're writing these essay/memoirs. A Father's Company Your opening ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: Epiphany
Hello, MialyNire. I'm here to review your poem. I like the photograph at the top. Did you take it? If so, it's nice. It makes me feel calm. I I ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: They Met.
Hello. I'm here to review your poem. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I don't really understand why you chose to bold some sections. I found ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: (Are You) Gay?
Hello, Strange. Well, this certainly seems more serious than usual. It's about one subject. I'm guessing this is autobiographical? It seems very personal. I thought it might be a joke ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: Content
Hi there! This is really cute! I really like the sentiment that you're getting across in this poem. It sounds pretty good to me, too! You don't focus too much ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: The White Hand
Hello, LittleFox! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day today! Let's jump right in, shall we? I really like all of the imagery that you use in this poem. ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Accedere Lucem
Hello! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day! Whoo! Go team go! To be honest, I don't know any Latin at all, but I can imagine that it sounds ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Free
Hi there, AshleyDashley! I'm here representing Team Potter this review day to look at your poem! Whoopee! I'm glad that you feel that way about your Aunt! This is a ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: The Hippie Strikes Again
After a long time avoiding this piece because I don't really know what to say about it, I'm here to give an unorganized, hunger-fueled review of it because it's review ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: He Did Not Die in Vain
Hello, Lucy! I'm here representing Team Potter for review day! Whoo! Go team, go! Let's dive into your poem! This is obviously a very personal poem, and so I won't ...
May 29, 2016
