Morkish

Here I am to review, babygiggles! -The feeling I get from this is that she is crying out for help/attention. Am I correct? Make sure you go back through and ...

A little technical first for you: "A woman roller skates by with her tiny Chihuahua in tow, pulling at the leash when a new person walks by, and bicyclists pedal ...

Hello Liaya! I'm not one for technicality in poems (my minor in college is in creative let's hope that changes soon). However, I can defiantly give you a taste of ...

Hello, babygiggles! I am here to give you your first review! For starters, the story started out great. You have some minor grammatical errors here and there you might want ...

As you can see, I'm attacking all of these on the green room! This was very educational to me. As someone who is taking his first steps to writing fiction, ...

Morkish, here for another review of your work, knight Dragon! I would go into a big discussion about this with you, because I truly love the idea of simply thinking ...

Hello Knight Dragon! Morkish here to give you a review! I do like what you have to say on this wordsmithing article. I agree that we need to step up ...

I do not read poetry enough as I should. I do like the stuff, just never read it! :P However, I do like what you have to say. One thing ...

Thank you for letting me read this writing. I have to say I can get a good amount of emotion from this. I always enjoy reading for emotion. Here are ...

I have a feeling that more is to follow this segment; so, I'm not too worried about the questions raised by unexplained things. Overall, I like what has been written. ...

Hello there! Just a few things I spotted during the read: -Rang instead of range. -A few past tense present tense swaps: keep it one or the other (I do ...

First off, I would like to say I do like fan-fiction. I do not read it much, and yet when I do, I always find it a really fun read. ...

The overall impression I received was very good! I understood that this was probably going to become more, so I wasn't really concerned with the things that weren't explained in ...

A very well written piece! The one thing that caught my eye was the "emerged from the woods and the sun..." paragraph. For a split second I was lost, because ...

Hello! I like your story, too! It has a great plot line, but it's going a little too fast. Have a little more backdrop to it, and it will be ...