Mooilky

Hello! Thank you for your review! The cat tree line is pretty complex so I totally get not understanding it. I was trying to play with the idea that though ...

Hello Liminality, if I had to pick an interpretation of what this poem means, I think I would conclude that it tells the story of a student going through a ...

Hello! I changed up the rhyme scheme at the end to signify the change in pace that occurs when a gathering ends. Thank you for your review!

Thank you for taking the time to review :)

Thank you for your review! :)

Well, the first part of the poem is a dream and I personally don't think dreams really have periods but they do have question marks and exclamation points. The reason ...

The third line of the list? I can only find 'to' at the end of number 4, and at that point I meant it to come across as "count to ...

Thank you for your feedback! :)

I understand how it might have been confusing but my use of punctuation was quite intentional. I made it the way I did so the necessary pauses in reading could ...

I'm sorry if this comes off as rude but if you could have this conversation privately instead of here I would really appreciate it. Thanks :)

Thank you for taking the time to write a review! I usually write my poems to sound like the way I would say them. So with the line "3,4,5=12" I ...

Thank you for your review! I made the changes you suggested :)

Thank you for reading, it's so lovely that you felt deeply for it. I really appreciate you taking the time to write a review. Thank you!

I really appreciate your feedback- thank you! :D

Thank you so much! :)