Mooilky

I really enjoyed reading this and figured that the most I can do in the form of review is tell you my conclusions. The suicide men are people sent to ...

So I read through this and jotted down my thoughts as I went. My thoughts will be in parenthesis and if I made changes to something I marked it with ...

This is very cleverly done. I like how instead of each letter starting a different sentence, they are scattered throughout. It creates an interesting rhythm. I wonder if perhaps the ...

I am also just getting out of a relationship with someone who cheated on me and I applaud you for making this. I'm somewhere around step 14 myself but I'm ...

This is a beautiful post. I am bisexual and just coming out of a relationship with a man who was not very good to me. What this will mean for ...

Short and sweet! I like the wording a lot but question the word sunshine, perhaps just "light" would suffice? The way you set up sunshine and darkness against each other ...

It took me a little bit to get that Snap is a snapping turtle! (At least that's what I hope he is otherwise this is embarrassing for me). This was ...

This poem really connected with me. As someone who struggles with depression and anxiety I feel like this really sums up the emotions a person goes through as they slip ...

I think there is a sort of beauty in the brevity of this poem. I can very easily see this as being used as the preface of some great odyssey. ...

I guess I just want to say the conclusions I made. I feel like on of the most important things a writer can hear is what someone else concluded from ...

The imagery is lovely and comforting but the stanza about the earth and her magesty sticks out in that it doesn't rhyme. I think perhaps there is a better way ...