MooCowPoop

Hello! I like the contrast you made between real life and what you actually posted. Well, if this poem has nothing to do with you at all, then that's okay! ...

Hello, this'll be a quick review! Suggestions: I suggest turning some of these words into contractions to make it flow better. Like these parts: "You want to eat me, but ...

Hello! First, I want to say this is a funny poem. Though, the balance between humor and seriousness is a little distracting and so is the rhyming. To rhyme or ...

YO! I am going to start with a sentence-by-sentence analysis and then talk about the piece as a whole. People need to stop arguing about who's right and which is ...

PLEASE PUT THIS IN THE LITERARY SPOTLIGHT! That oughta get their attention... Now, I wish I could physically express how utterly impressed I am with this piece (but this is ...

First of all, Nympha sounds like a beautiful name! Wow... this is a beautiful love poem too. The imagery in the first stanza really pulled me into wanting to read ...

YO! I'm BACK! I'll start off with the sentences. Though other users have pointed out some improvements that can be done to the sentences, I am going to give you ...

Wow, that was really funny. This is satirical, right? Anyway, I really liked the "It's not enough for me" parts. I could see this as a love/hate poem for a ...

Hello Gaurav009! I'm here to review your work! So, first thing that stood out to me about this piece was this line: "In India, if you mess with a policeman, ...

Daww! So cute! This is such a nice piece of writing/love letter. The quirky little parts I found in it, like waiting for their person's replies via trxt message and ...

This is an interesting poem. Actually, it's really good. Its about a person admitting that in their relationship ( whether past or present, I cannot tell) things were pretty bad. ...

Okay, that was very, very long. So long that I couldn't finish reading it. But that's no matter, for I shall still review with as much might and (hopefully) efficacy ...

This is hilarious. Once again you've got me giggling. I really like your humor writing-- especially these conspiracies you write about. Is the 'Kenny' a typo in line two or ...

Ah! This is awesome! I can see it as some chant people would use to get people riled up! Like a pep chant! At first I was a little which ...

Oh, my, goodness, this is simply amazing! Amazing! One of the best vampire.stories I've ever read! Every detail, line, and image is clear. This is an outstanding piece. Okay, no ...