Monsters

You should be able to edit it and put a comment in to say deleted

Thanks for your feedback; it always helps hearing the ambiguous, confusing parts of my poems from my readers. This is particularly helpful.

Okay

I thought about it more in depth and changed "pain" to "screams" for clarity sake. It seems a bit more appropriate and seems to show more then tell so thanks, ...

Hey, purple. The stanza below that one talks about him re-making himself, thus reincarnations. Thanks for the review and the incite!

It is okay

I'm not going to argue with you. If you don't find my review helpful then ignore it.

heath ledger can be a little scary sometimes :)

Hmm. It does make sense why you would think that, because a cloth usually exemplifies a two dimensional object even though it is technically not (a cloth still has height ...

It is about whatever you want it to be about. :)

:) That is okay. Thank you for the review

I don't like to discuss my analysis of my poems but it is intended to be one poem and it is in the first person

I understand most of your intentions I believe. You are a ghost, thus no working heart which is really a metaphor for a feeling you have of barely existing or ...

It is one poem.

Thanks guys :)