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Re: I am human.
Heya! Here's the critique : I am broken, it's the morning after.
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Just die
Hey Linds! Long time, no talky. Anyways, I'm trying to become a mentor, so you are going to be the first person to get a 'thorough' critique from me. ;) ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Letters to Raven
If I could use only one word to describe this, it would be... interesting. It IS different than anything you've ever wrote, but different is good-at least most of the ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: The Thorn
Awesome Seraph! I love it! (Told you I'd critique some of your stuff--eventually...) I love everything about it. And, as hard as this is for me to believe, I understand ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Love
Hayden!!! I didn't think you'd post it, but you did! I thought maybe you were--dare I say it?--lying... Whoops. Misjudgement there. Anywho's, I'd just say to elaborate. Make it longer ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Deception! at the Disco [Part 1]
Love this one. I found no mistakes at all. I've never heard the band, but down here in Florida, they are so friggin' famous and popular! (I only listen to ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: Flying South (sorta) #1
Wow, 'Butter In My Hair'. That was sort of rude. It made me laugh. I was upset but this made my day. Thanks for writing it! :) Keep it up!
Dec 15, 2007 -
Re: Songwood
Okay, like really scary at the end. But then again, you left me hanging. Darn! Lol. I'll have to read the other parts later tonight after my grandpa's birthday dinner. ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: The Blade of Eternity
Okay, as you (sort of) stated in my little forumn-like-thingy, 'long critiques aren't my thing'. Well, actually, they are when I'm in the mood and not tired. So, before I ...
Dec 12, 2007 -
Re: Endless Possibilities
Very, very, very good writing! I love the whole plot! But, as mentioned above, the characters are yet to be described... Unless of course you are waiting until a bit ...
Dec 9, 2007 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks
Wow. Kleptomaniac is right! I really like this piece, as I am weird myself. ;) Good work! PM me too! Please critique any of my work that you wish. Thanks! ...
Dec 6, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
I didn't cry on the outside, because my best friend was reading over my shoulder. But I was sobbing quietly and she sort of heard me, so she came over ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Ink Heart & Ink Spell by Cornelia Funke
I have read InkHeart, InkSpell, Dragon Rider, and the Thief Lord, all of which are by Cornelia Funke. And I just wanted to add my input into your conversation. And ...
Nov 29, 2007